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  1. Mr Cooper June 2, 2015 at 8:17 am |

    Thank you Dabin. One thing I need you to remember…

    …Paragraphs!

    Also, for a piece of writing like this, make sure you have a main idea in mind before you start, and make sure this is clear to your audience from early on in the piece. Than you can explore the topic by providing details – but only details that are relevant and connect back to the main idea.

    It’s been a pleasure reading your work this year Dabin. Keep up the hard work!

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